I’m not sure how I feel about this picture.
There are some things I really like about it, and others, well, I just don’t quite know. Is it good? Sure, in a lot of ways it really is. But in some other ways it doesn’t quite work or fails entirely. It’s weird. I honestly can’t quite make up my mind on this one, and I’m really curious what you think.
At the risk of sounding a bit too self-deprecating (which is not my intention, mind you. I prefer to engage in introspection and reflection, and I hope that’s how this analysis comes across) let’s take a look at the things that I like about this picture. What works well, I suppose you might say, if this were some kind of customer-service survey :)
I really like the rich textures on display here. The subtle grooves and crevasses, the way the light bounces off the edges of the leaf and glistens on every little bump and indentation lend this dying specimen an entirely new life right in front of your eyes. Do yourself a favor and click through to the original on Flickr, view it at full resolution, and you’ll see what I mean. I also like how I was able to capture the subject as it hung delicately between the arms of some kind of native Oklahoma plant, caught on its way to the ground from the tree above as if it were saying I got you, man!
Also of note: the entirely out-of-focus background which almost seems like broad brush strokes, crossing the frame in wide swaths of dull earth tones. For that you can thank the f/8 aperture which I find myself using so often in my close-up photography, along with the AI noise reduction feature in Lightroom which transformed this ISO 5600 shot into one that looks as if it were taken at ISO 100. Whatever magic Adobe bakes into that algorithm, it just works. And finally, the pièce de résistance, if you will, is the drop of water hanging precariously from the base of the stem. It’s a subtle but meaningful touch that elevates the image beyond just a simple leaf stuck in a brown plant.
So what’s not to like? Why am I so harsh on this photo? As much as it succeeds in some important areas, it entirely collapses in others essential elements of photography. For one, the color. A yellow subject against a yellow-and-brown background does not a good image make, no matter how sharp the former and how blurry the latter. I have trouble distinguishing the subject from the other elements, and that’s not a good thing. I also don’t like the placement, with the leaf just a bit too far off center. There’s an odd gap on the right side that could have been easily alleviated had I just composed the image with the leaf scooted over just a bit. A rookie mistake, to be sure, but one that I’m clearly still learning to overcome even after all these years :)
Finally, I don’t like how the withered, dry branch juts down awkwardly from the left side of the leaf. If it was long enough to stick out the top it might work, but as it is…it just feels weird and unsettling.
And so I’ll close with this: I view this picture as an opportunity to learn and grow. The good things? Keep doing them. The things that didn’t quite work? Maybe find a way to avoid them next time. And through it all, just keep taking pictures and enjoying the process.



